RenoakRhythm's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Creative Piano Ep.2]

great

This was really great!

The melody was very moving and not so repetative. The different rhythms you had kept you entertained. So the song was great.

Pointers: Needs better mixing and mastering
Needs other instruments and bass and more FX.

again great job!

8/10
and i'll vote ya a 5 :P

Skylence responds:

thanks man. =D

[Final Thought (Original Mix)]

so... how have you gone unnoticed?

wowzers.... i'm ashamed i have ever gotten best of the week when there is quality like this lying around here.

Amazing job... it did take a while for the build up, but thats the name of the game

101/10/

wowwowowoowowowoow

[(Dj-NX) Take Me Away]

interesting

1:27 starting redeeming this song for me

The bass was a little much after the intro... it was cool, but the mixing may need some work. Though remember, just opinion, not like it was bad or anything.

I actually liked the vocal samples.... it kept it dark and distorted, which it needed to keep the mxing from going back and forth etc.

I absolutely loved the break beat... i think you could redo this and make an intro hard and distorted, then go into something like the break beat... you'd sound very prodigy ish. If that is the goal then, i would clean up the mix a bit... its kinda muddied. but you could get some awesome vocals in there during the break beat, just suck out some of that middle ground noise floating around in there giving it a non clear feel.

I voted 5, didn't want to feel your wrath of the zero bombers....lol.....

good job, really really good job... a true 8 on a scale compared with the commercial stuff out there.... a 10/10 if on a NG artist rating.

so agian, enjoy a 5 :)

NX177 responds:

wow man thanks for that awesome review! i actually might start redoing the song. u have some really good ideas.
oh and thanks for understanding NG is different then Pro stuff. XD

[TR: Big Blue]

80's

For some reason this song really reminded me of the 80's.

This song could probably fair better in the video game section.

I liked the pitch changes those were cool.

Keep submitting. Keep posting.

I voted 5 to be nice. maybe that'll counter a couple uneccassry 0's

later

ZackV93 responds:

Hah yeah I realized kinda late that I put it in techno instead of vg-remix's..

Also not sure why people have voted zero, this really doesn't deserve that..

[Audacity rap]

facepalm

i'm in love with this.

RunnerX responds:

yer if you like it cause its a fail, then lol, aparently my matrix one is a bit better, my biggest problem at thios point was I didnt have a mic or music.
I got the new mic but still lacking music

[Rise Of The Sun]

great melody

The lead melody is very cool and catchy and still feel like it tells a story.

YOu still need more work on everything surrouding it.

But keep this melody and keep re writing this, maybe down the road you'll make this song famous.

Good job...

i'll vote a 5 :)

Skylence responds:

thanks man!

[{425} Invincible]

great song

I 5's it :)

Yes rate this as a useless review...

i still 5'ed it :) good job.

Michael425 responds:

haha thank you mr RR.

[Crusing Altitude [SMD]]

surprised :)

1) i really liked just having it slowly fade in like that.

2) The melody written was beautiful

3) The mixing was excellent.

4) 1:15 ish when everything came in was decent. I would change the hats and snares and stuff around a bit try get some more stuff, maybe more reverb... i'm not sure.... but i'd mess with that some more.

5) I like the low section with claps, i would change the beat up a little there, or add in some effects and what nots to keep the listener entertained... things that don't even have to standout much, maybe just some filter playing, so even the listner doesn't reconize change, the ear wont get bored.

6) Coming back in after that the cymbol felt a little harsh and not enough reverby... or maybe layer the cymbol some more and so it adds some cool dynamics to it.

7) The last thing is your outro... which was perfect... i like the effect put on the string instrument, like it was reversing. great outro.

So much improvement... also it was fun to have to jump in the tail end of the stickcam... u missed a bunch of amazing stuff though... nubbin is truly the master of percussion... just incredible.

enjoy a true 8 from me and a friendly 5!!!

SmdSkata responds:

Thanks bro. I'll take a look at it all in FL when I have time. I have another version of this song and I sampled Airline Cabin Announcements in to my song. I'll show it to you if you want. I'll put it up here when I update it again. Thanks for the rating. :)

[(NUB)The Wizard's Finale]

i votes the 5

great work as usual. So when are you becoming famous yet?

nubbinownz responds:

NEVER!! MUAHAHA .. I don't know. We'll see how this album goes over haha.

[-Enclosure]

lolz

just saw this in the forum.,.. how funny.

Enjoy the DL i guess..... :P