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yay its done.... you rock

I gives it 10!

Thanks for putting it together... major points to you .

5/5

10

Skela responds:

Heh, np <3

yes yes yes yes yes yes

I loved the intro and i love the stuttering lead... and i love filtering and i love the rhythm and kicks and the bass and everything.... this song is perfect for what it is..... dam you...dam you....

5/5
10/10

NEEDS TO BE FINISHED.

heartless1298 responds:

Lol. Dude, this song is finished... (http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/list en/183974). The finished version is going on my album "Winter Wonderland".

love the drums

I loved the drums... reminded me of Africa. I loved those drums there, i miss that.

Intro kinda long... but i'm a long intro writing kinda guy, its hard for me to come in quick and hard, so i feel ya.

I was little confused by the sudden change ... but i get it since this is just demos... i like... very good work. I loved the melody of the second half.... great echo/panning effect on the lead.

heartless1298 responds:

Thanks!! The full version is up for purchase on my music store if you like it enough ^^

dude bro

K, my friend... this is perfect for background instrumental for some cool hiphop jazzish stuff. Check out Horrorshow on myspace.... awesome up and coming group. We have to write some lyrics... do some recording, and do some backup vocals and harmony.

Serious.

i liked it

whats up with the votes. This reminds me of Horrorshow... without the cool vocals of course. (They are an Australian hiphop type group - really chill and awesome).

not bad

i liked that you turned the crowd off.... its annoying when people leave that effect on all the way through the song. I would recommend keeping them off as much as possible.

The overall melody was good and the offbeat bass of course is catchy. The percussion was ok... could be more exciting and varied. - though i'm no shining example of varied percussion.

4/5

good job keep it up and you'll more listens etc.

PM me when you have a good song.

IndieDance responds:

will do =] thanks

returning the favor with pleasure

Ok review time:

Production Quality: 9.75 - Just shy of professional mixing and mastering

Song Structure: 9.00 - Solid structure, no crazy out of place sections. Good growth from intro to verse/chorus. Decent lulls...sometimes alittle long. Good climaxes. Outro was decent.

Playability: 8.95 - Great melody, great instruments, good feel... lulls were too long and soft. And the climax could have been stronger.

Great job.

5/5

Laters

Rawmin responds:

Thanks for returning the favor! I appreciate the comment about the mastering, cause I spent along time on that!

loved it

loved the pitch changing in the intro.

Its a very catchy synth.
The kick is good.
The other percussion could be slightly louder
The other synth that comes in needs to go (42 seconds)
The stuttering is awesome.... use that for a chorus and some quick rhythm... loads of potential.

good chord progression

Its a very common one, but catchy as always.... good work.

Kiranu responds:

Thanks for the review

no review but 5 vote

Just showing the support.... no review sorry.

5/5

Good job.

Nav responds:

Thanks! :)

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