RenoakRhythm's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[~EnV~Demo Mix 2!]

wow

I'm so impressed. I'm really excited to hear all these when finished. I've been looking around Newgrounds for some good artists, and I think have found one. I can't really give much advice or criticism since I'm not exactly pro. But when the songs are complete i'd be happy to give my opinion.

Anyways, I just uploaded my first submission. It looks like you have a ton of people reviewing you already and probably famous on here or something, but I'd appreciate it if you reviewed my first song: Track One_RR

[DJS - Master Blaster]

that sounds like a bass hunter rhythm

This is a slow "jump style" feel. I love that rhythm. Make this into a song.

Only an 8, and i'll vote u a 5 cuse u only have a 3 and this should be a 4.

Could review my song "Track One_RR" its in the techno section. Its my first submission and trying to see if my style works for Newgrounds.

[Carnivalivore]

interesting

The intro was good, but then the kick and the sounds got really confusing after 20 or so seconds. There was distortion on the kick, and didn't go well with the ears.

The melody was very unique, i'll give u that. It almost had a native american feel. The main synth after 1:22 was cool, had an interesting melody. I never really got into the song at any point.

I think you have potential. My advice would be to remake a song u really like, so u can figure a could pattern for a song overall. Once u really do well on a remake, then write ur own stuff using a similar pattern. This kind went into a bunch of different feels and genres.

I can see though that u put time an effort into this so good job. There were some cool effects and panning and stuff.

Anyways, I uploaded my first song to Newgrounds. Could you leave me a review? (Track One_RR) in the techno section. It was weird, i had 2 votes of 5 and 2 downloads then i got another download and that person voted a 0 or something. Whats up with that? lol.

Anyways, look foward to hearing ur improvements in the future.

13G1H responds:

Thanks man, we will definatly check your shit out. u should check out our other songs though! Look through my submissions and find The Crow Is The Answer and Jihad Soundz. both are way better then carnivalivore.

[Euro Breakbeat Trance Tribute]

captured

10 out of 10 cause this is awesome.

I voted 5 but was tempted to vote 4 cause its not a full song, hope you're not offended.

Could you PM me when it is completed?

And I uploaded my first submission, could you check it out (Track One_RR) under the techno section.

[Wish For Death--_--]

Distortion Awesome

The intro was epic. The guitar distortion, the strings, the timing, the melody, it was just epic.

I gave it a 9 instead of a 10 because i was hoping you'd use harsher percussion through out the song, but it sounded too islandy.... but maybe I'm missin the point of the song with that. But I'll still vote 5 cause this was above the amatuer bar.

whats interesting is that you can keep people's attention for so long.... well done.

Well could you check out a track of mine, its my first submission (Track One_RR) in the techno section.

RR

[(Dj-NX) Into the Assault]

Great loop

I would love to hear this in a song.

My favorite part is 20 seconds when the low synth (almost bass guitar sounding) comes in and makes that great chord progression.

I'm adding you to my favorites and I'll check out your other stuff.

Could u check out my song, its just got accepted. (Track One_RR)

Thanks

RR

NX177 responds:

l0l im going to master this sucker really good, just u wait. its going to be awesome... i think... lol