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great song

I 5's it :)

Yes rate this as a useless review...

i still 5'ed it :) good job.

Michael425 responds:

haha thank you mr RR.

surprised :)

1) i really liked just having it slowly fade in like that.

2) The melody written was beautiful

3) The mixing was excellent.

4) 1:15 ish when everything came in was decent. I would change the hats and snares and stuff around a bit try get some more stuff, maybe more reverb... i'm not sure.... but i'd mess with that some more.

5) I like the low section with claps, i would change the beat up a little there, or add in some effects and what nots to keep the listener entertained... things that don't even have to standout much, maybe just some filter playing, so even the listner doesn't reconize change, the ear wont get bored.

6) Coming back in after that the cymbol felt a little harsh and not enough reverby... or maybe layer the cymbol some more and so it adds some cool dynamics to it.

7) The last thing is your outro... which was perfect... i like the effect put on the string instrument, like it was reversing. great outro.

So much improvement... also it was fun to have to jump in the tail end of the stickcam... u missed a bunch of amazing stuff though... nubbin is truly the master of percussion... just incredible.

enjoy a true 8 from me and a friendly 5!!!

SmdSkata responds:

Thanks bro. I'll take a look at it all in FL when I have time. I have another version of this song and I sampled Airline Cabin Announcements in to my song. I'll show it to you if you want. I'll put it up here when I update it again. Thanks for the rating. :)

i votes the 5

great work as usual. So when are you becoming famous yet?

nubbinownz responds:

NEVER!! MUAHAHA .. I don't know. We'll see how this album goes over haha.

not bad... keep going.

The kick that came in around 30 seconds was awesome and sexy. Ya keep workng on the synths and the filters. Um, i'm kinda worried i may not have explained how to use the free filter right. So PM me pics and details so i can see what you did.

Also, go onto youtube and search warbeats FL studio tutorials... a lot to learn from that.

Good job, keep it coming. voted 5, to be nice.... :)

Sacrafan responds:

:D yay!

title of epic proportions

I give you 10 and 5 based on the title alone.

Thanks for the lulz and the good listen.

And by the way, you're looking awfully attractive lately.

SolusLunes responds:

Lulz.

The title is epic. Truly.

lol, people can't get enough tetris

thats funny, hope this gets best of the, cause that'd be just freaking hilirious.

5/5

heartless1298 responds:

Thanks. And best of the...

lulz u have been noticed never mind

There we go. lol, i was gunna make sure u made best of the week this week, but looks like u already got one... so no cookie for you. lol.

great, song..

Later.

Dj-Brand0 responds:

Haha yea, but hey that was about a month ago ^_^
Can I still have a cookie? :D ^_^

Thanks again Renoak! Thanks for the rate and review!

-Cheers Brando

i liked

I liked the synth coming in just before the minute mark. It reminds me of so many popular songs for some reason.

Well my friend Brando in Australia.. I think u have a good amount of talent here and I'm sad you don't want a career in music. Since you're only 15 and have a good potential to do good things.

I really liked the vox by the way... classic.

I'm going to get you noticed on NG if you don't mind.

Dj-Brand0 responds:

Thanks Renoak! Glad you liked all the sounds I used. Thanks for the advice and encouragement. :D I don't completely plan to have a career in music, maybe just yet.
I plan to finish school with flying colours, go to Uni and study
multimedia / IT / animation and interactive arts.
It would be really cool to become an IT technician or or a multimedia developer. I'm good at most things and I thinks that a good skill to have. I also have a good talent at drawing. Looks like I'm all round ready for anything.

Thanks for the review, glad you liked the intro. At the beginning when I first sent this song in the vocal had a really annoying mix/cut to it that went for most of the introduction I made. So I faded it out and added heaps of nice arps and effects to make up for it. So far it's worked very well. If you could get me noticed more than I am on newgrounds, that would be really Madd! I can see I already have a number of great people backing my songs up.

Thanks Renoak and All who support me.

-Cheers Brando

spot on.

This was spot on hardstyle...

Hardcore repetative,

Hardcore bass

hardcore saws.

Nice job.

Dj-Brand0 responds:

Hehe Thanks Sam. Hardcore repetitve >_> I know lol. I should have put more time into it.
Thanks for the straight to the point review.

-Cheers Brando

good attempt for a nooby

I recommend taking some mixing tutorials by Warbeats on youtube or something.

Also i would say right off the top of my head you need more than just a low kick for your percussion. And in hats, snares, toms, etc.

I think u did a nice job on your lead sounds though. Keep what you have learned there to add to your new stuff you're going to learn.

I'll vote 5 anyways... :)

ThunderHorseL responds:

Much appreciated!

Next year I'm deciding to be good at this.

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