RenoakRhythm's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[midnight party]

ah i see what you're talking about

hey, ok.... we used a similar sounding synth. I see, ya totally, that sounds real close to the harmony synth i used. Pretty cool.

Good job.

aldlv responds:

=D... yep... both songs sounds pretty the same in that part...
but well thanx for the review man =D

[Dramatic Reading - Xaos PM]

BEST OF THE WEEK

how did this get best of the week... because this needs to be best of all time....

WOOOOOOOOO this was awesome!

Rig responds:

Haha, thanks! :D

[Fredgy - Activate]

good job

Activate: nice... I like that vocal sample.

Good intro, i liked the bass coming in 24ish... kick sounded good, but when it came in, i would have changed the the main synth you were using to kinda let us all know there is change and growth... like throw a filter on it, maybe change the EQ or something.... maybe more echo and reverb.

Overall the song felt alittle all over, but it had its catchy moments and it had its nice instruments. So i think it has loads of potential... the percussion was decent too.

I would focus on the mix some more, it felt like it was clipping and peaking at points, and i would like to hear the snares more and less synth.. (DnB baby)... and also the Activate Vocal sample could also have been changed through out the song to give it better flow and direction.

Anyways... good work, keep it up.

PS - enjoy a 5 from me anyways.... :)

Fredgy responds:

Ow thanks for review! XD
ok, i 'll try to work on it all :)
Thanks for 5 & 7 ;-)
I let you hear if i editted my song :)

Grts
Fredgy

[.:HMS:. Boiling Blood]

5 ing

just informing you i'm beginning my 5 bombing...

lulz here i go... enjoy them, hope they bring you more points...

:P

HMS-Productions responds:

LOL you're not supposed to SAY that :p

thanks anyways :D

[VorteX - (AriA)]

hmmmm

Well, i wasn't a fan of the intro, and the lead synth. It sounds like a clown circus synth. I'm also not a fan of non effective use of the crowd effects.... try a bit more to get them sounding more realistic to how a crowd would react. Since its really difficult i don't add that to my stuff (i did on one song and i don't think I'll ever do it again).

Like you said the transitions were not exactly smooth and flowing - The song did feel like it went all over the place.

I know its alot of criticism and I'm not trying to come down on you hard.

Let me tell you what u did do well:

The mix didn't seem too bad, the kick and percussion wasn't bad.... sometimes the hats were little to predominant, but it wasn't to bad. And the claps were fine. I did like about 1:25 ish for a bit, the synth was cool and the melody written was nice.

I'm not sure where you've come from, and this might be major improvements for you.... just keep it up, and the songs will get better. And i know i made fun of ya on the forum in the thread you made, don't take it personal thousands of people constantly self prmote their stuff.

Keep it up.

Later

I'll be nice and give it a 4 :) fight off those 0 bombers

IndieDance responds:

haha =], a 4 usually translates into a 8/10 =] but sure ill take it.

and ahhh 0 bombers lol =] i dont really care, aslong as i get feedback about my music and people like it.

this is one song i def think im going to take the second melody from and use it again, as u said, i liked it too.

but its k =] and thanks for the review.

[Teh Neutral Collab! (caps!!!)]

yay its done.... you rock

I gives it 10!

Thanks for putting it together... major points to you .

5/5

10

Skela responds:

Heh, np <3

[.HLS. Submissive]

yes yes yes yes yes yes

I loved the intro and i love the stuttering lead... and i love filtering and i love the rhythm and kicks and the bass and everything.... this song is perfect for what it is..... dam you...dam you....

5/5
10/10

NEEDS TO BE FINISHED.

heartless1298 responds:

Lol. Dude, this song is finished... (http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/list en/183974). The finished version is going on my album "Winter Wonderland".

[.HLS. Absolute Zero (NG Edit)]

love the drums

I loved the drums... reminded me of Africa. I loved those drums there, i miss that.

Intro kinda long... but i'm a long intro writing kinda guy, its hard for me to come in quick and hard, so i feel ya.

I was little confused by the sudden change ... but i get it since this is just demos... i like... very good work. I loved the melody of the second half.... great echo/panning effect on the lead.

heartless1298 responds:

Thanks!! The full version is up for purchase on my music store if you like it enough ^^

[Temple of Illusion (^AkA^)]

not bad

i liked that you turned the crowd off.... its annoying when people leave that effect on all the way through the song. I would recommend keeping them off as much as possible.

The overall melody was good and the offbeat bass of course is catchy. The percussion was ok... could be more exciting and varied. - though i'm no shining example of varied percussion.

4/5

good job keep it up and you'll more listens etc.

PM me when you have a good song.

IndieDance responds:

will do =] thanks

[<DjR> Heading Home]

returning the favor with pleasure

Ok review time:

Production Quality: 9.75 - Just shy of professional mixing and mastering

Song Structure: 9.00 - Solid structure, no crazy out of place sections. Good growth from intro to verse/chorus. Decent lulls...sometimes alittle long. Good climaxes. Outro was decent.

Playability: 8.95 - Great melody, great instruments, good feel... lulls were too long and soft. And the climax could have been stronger.

Great job.

5/5

Laters

Rawmin responds:

Thanks for returning the favor! I appreciate the comment about the mastering, cause I spent along time on that!