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good chord progression

Its a very common one, but catchy as always.... good work.

Kiranu responds:

Thanks for the review

no review but 5 vote

Just showing the support.... no review sorry.

5/5

Good job.

Nav responds:

Thanks! :)

Light shall win?

Wtf is up with the light base and the stuff they are pumping out? Just epically awesome!

5/5.

Look forward to the finished product from each aura, and then the final mix.

Neutral power???lol.

Jebbal responds:

Lights are just the fucking best! Its gonna be a blow out!

I can't wait for everything to be finished either. :) Should be pretty cooool.

<3 Neutrals

Thanks for the review!

No you may not

Not fair... using the this is just totally not fair to rest of us that do not make good music...lol. Pull it from the competition now.

anywho jokes aside. I look forward to the aura collab being finished, this is going to be a NG epic! Nice work so far guys!

I vote cause I love.

5 ers

x-Exodus-X responds:

Haha :P
It will be epic for sure. Thank you!

this was good

Sup Nate,

I think Karco had some good points and criticism never hurt anyone. If anything it may help with some editing of the piece. I'd keep critics close so you're not surrounded by YES men. It'll be hard to push yourself if you have no one pointing out areas of improvement.

I for one, prefer your harder club style songs, and do think this songs structure is lacking a little bit. But there are so many positives about this piece that it stands above the typical submissions here on Newgrounds. I think, revisit this a couple more times and it should place very well in the competition.

Good submission. Keep me posted on your house / club music, and let me know if you revisit this piece.

RR

voted 5 because i'm fighting for the cause against regulator (0) voters.

dj-Nate responds:

Like I said below though, I'm always open for criticism. But he said some other things I don't appreciate. I dunno RR, but it's just how I am I guess.

Not bad bro

I think the mix was actually well done. The vocals came out pretty clean in the final product, so good job not getting the vocals muddied in there.

The kick and bass seemed alright. But:

I noticed a number of presets from FL Studios.... let me know if i'm wrong.
I also didn't feel excited about the song... it felt on the same level the whole way through.
The ending was kinda misguided, but still entertaining... The high arp/bell felt like a bridge instead of an outro.

Still, this was good, and I know you'll get zero bombed so enjoy a 5 from me.

RR

DeejayDeeZ responds:

Yeah, thanks for the review.

Well, the samples i use is mainly VEC1 and VEC2.
There are only 1 or 2 presets from Fl studio btw.

Agreed, the ending sounds like a bridge. However, The idea was to make it a little less repitive if you know what i mean.

- Deejay DeeZ

underdog

you're talented... keep it up, you'll get noticed.

5/5

Sonofkirk responds:

I hope so ; ). Thanks a bunch for the review bro \m/

this was flow

There have been crazy amounts of zero bombings in the last couple hours... i had my song just destroyed... so its not just you.

Production Quality = 9 , no problems
The Score = 7.5 , It felt a little boring and i didn't feel like it captured me.
Instrument Choice = 8.5, I liked everything until the very end with the guitarish synth. (2:45)

Good job man, good luck with the contest.

Quarl responds:

rawr. That guitar synth at 2:45 is my favorite part. It's teh climax. Regardless, I had a feeling people wouldn't like it, so I'm not offended or anything. Tis the way things are.

so different

lol, just realized we submitted to the MAC almost at the same time. WEIRD!

Ok, this is awesome, its nice to see a different feel in the competition.

at 45 seconds the instrument that comes in sounds sharp. I would check that again, maybe fine tune it just a tat.

The bass was so f-ing groovy and catchy... almost a mix of funk and hiphop there... :P

Overall just chill!

5/5

PERVOK responds:

Oh, that was just the bell thing playing the same riff from before in that segment, but an octave or so higher. It resonates pretty loud when it's played that high, so that's why it sounds sharp. I can assure you that it isn't though, and I couldn't think of another way to write it, so I just left it.

Thanks for the review, bro!

Next year I'm deciding to be good at this.

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