Concert Hall
It sounds like this was written in a concert hall... you need to let me know how you got such clean reverb. This really goes with the picture on the MAC 8, i think mine may have been to quick, but i guess its all personal imagry right?
5/5
Well, first off, I started from a good sample base (Reason Pianos.)
Then, I layered two pianos together- this song is actually not one piano sample playing- rather, it's two from the refill. It's just hard to tell the difference because they give the exact timbre I was looking for.
Finally, there wasn't much more to it than a lot of hardcore RV7000 tweakage- I just screwed around with it until I got a sound I liked.
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This was dark and just fucking great.
This sounds like a radio edit.
I would suggest making a full version of this.
Or if you have a full version, please send me in the right direction.
RR
Yeah, I had to cut it down a bit. I can send you the 5 minute one if you want.
1 step below profesh
5/5
Downloaded.
I hope this makes best of the week.
LIKES:
The way the outro and intro work pretty good from end, looping back to the beginning... you don't hear that very often.
The Intro was great.
The sounds used were not recognizable in FL studios, nice.
The mix wasn't too bad, Karco gave plenty of suggestions to fix that.
The score was great... i have no suggestions
I think you're really going to get pro quality on your next work... congrats.
DISLIKES:
The outro, needs to land the listener down more gently as well as alert us its coming to an end... if you don't know what I mean by these stupid metaphors PM me.
Length.... make it longer.
Guitar, as Karco said, centralize that guitar... and at times it becomes hidden, locate those spots and bring it out some. I do like that the guitar comes in panned (right i believe) but bring it to the middle at the latest after 1 measure.
The Bass..... i think for the most part the roughness of it is ok, but i would generally keep it smoother, until times you bring it out and you want it rough to bring it out for a moment and change the mood slightly, before going back into the general song feel. I would especially be careful with keeping it rough when it is just percussion and bass.... I would think maybe rough it as you lead into verse or chorus, or rough it at the start of the verse or chorus and then filter it back to a smoother state.
You know... if you do some better mixing you can easily have a vocalist in this, and it would just be brilliant!
PM when you have new work, and especially if you update this song.
RR
yeah the outtro got a little rushed sicne i was a) considering making it longer, and b) its intended to be thrown into a mix by my friend so i didn't really pay much attention to it, but given i expand it, ill do better hehe.
i thought the roughness was good, i tried to use the smoother one for smoother parts. but i guess its a little too rough? ill work on it.
and if iwere to do vocals, well, i'd center the mix around the vocalist, like in this remix i made: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/168894. now, to find a vocalist... hummm
i will do, and ill take a look at your stuff in a bit. maybei can whore myself enough to thwart the 0bombers on tuesday? haha
Automation Clips / effects
I would like to know how many automation clips you used :) .
Firstly i think this is more House / Trance. But who cares its all blendy anyways, except the really really dancy songs, if u know what I mean.
I like the name of the song. so plus points for BeatSource.
The piano was good. I also like the mixing job, well done... i'm not 100% on the mastering, but it sounds decent as far as I'm concerned.
The only reason i gave it a 9 instead of a 10 that the arrangement kinda felt alittle boring.... but thats all about about taste... as far as production this is excellent.
5/5
Oh and could you review my latest song, its just an intro so it wont take long:
"Background Trance2_Intro_RR"
Good work!
yo dood thanks for the great review!
:D
Well written
This was very well written, some of the synths were great (lead) and i'm really liking the melody..... but the percussion was lacking.... maybe it was my speakers, but they felt muddy and soft. Work on the mix and eq a little, maybe use some different percussion instruments if that doesn't clear it up. But well done.... i gave it an 8, but i'll vote 5, cause i know the bombers will bomb.
Could you review my latest song pretty please:
"Background Trance2_Intro_RR"
Yeah i'll review it. Thanks for the review :)
vocal heaven
Just quality here.
The string pad was delicious. The vocals were delightfully placed.
The piano/string combo was 100% win.
The beat was right on, couldn't hear any off from the vocals.
The landscape pads were great.
Effects were pro on this... so much attention to detail, man.
Mastering as well.... just right on.
2:12 was yummie too, the jazzy, hiphop, pop synth was just juicy and i want to eat it.
Anyways, i think you could have a career in this.... go whore yourself now to producers.
10,5,added to favorite artists.
RR
haha wow! lol, ill have to think about that one. but i doubt ill go deep into music industry [at least, yet] since im focused on other stuff--this is more of a hobby. but maybe i should find more ways to get exposure? :D yep
ill take a look at your song once i got some time. peace
interesting
The intro was good, but then the kick and the sounds got really confusing after 20 or so seconds. There was distortion on the kick, and didn't go well with the ears.
The melody was very unique, i'll give u that. It almost had a native american feel. The main synth after 1:22 was cool, had an interesting melody. I never really got into the song at any point.
I think you have potential. My advice would be to remake a song u really like, so u can figure a could pattern for a song overall. Once u really do well on a remake, then write ur own stuff using a similar pattern. This kind went into a bunch of different feels and genres.
I can see though that u put time an effort into this so good job. There were some cool effects and panning and stuff.
Anyways, I uploaded my first song to Newgrounds. Could you leave me a review? (Track One_RR) in the techno section. It was weird, i had 2 votes of 5 and 2 downloads then i got another download and that person voted a 0 or something. Whats up with that? lol.
Anyways, look foward to hearing ur improvements in the future.
Thanks man, we will definatly check your shit out. u should check out our other songs though! Look through my submissions and find The Crow Is The Answer and Jihad Soundz. both are way better then carnivalivore.
Great loop
I would love to hear this in a song.
My favorite part is 20 seconds when the low synth (almost bass guitar sounding) comes in and makes that great chord progression.
I'm adding you to my favorites and I'll check out your other stuff.
Could u check out my song, its just got accepted. (Track One_RR)
Thanks
RR
l0l im going to master this sucker really good, just u wait. its going to be awesome... i think... lol
Next year I'm deciding to be good at this.
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